All Comments on 'What She Wants, She Gets'

Great, make the next ones a little longer please

Let’s hear more!

Great start! Can’t wait to see what kinds of loving debauchery she leads him to next.

This definitely needs another chapter! That was good. Very descriptive and sexy. However being plunked down in the middle of the scene was a lot like teasing or foreplay. What happened to get them there? What will happen next. And I hope daddy gets a bit more of a speaking part. :-)

Not a big fan of strokers from the gitgo but keep om I'LL READ

You write extremely well, the story is short and sweet, I’d love to have had some preamble… seduction leading up to the point of penetration. How he first realized her feelings, etc.

Oh hell yeah I want to read more. Bring it on please.

this became real good this became real alright . however though i'm not the type that likes

( WamBamThankYouMam ) [ get directly the point ] { than suddenly poof thing already over } ...........

WE'RE GONNA NEED PREQUEL EXPLAIN HOW IT BEGAN . WE'RE ALSO GONNA NEED

LONGER THIS :-)

Loved the story so far. Love the daughter's dirty talk.

Please continue, with that tiny fuck slut taking a Daddy facial. Then drinking Daddy's thick cum load.

I'd love to read about her dressing up in sexy lingerie. Sheer bra and satin garter belt, sheer stockings with frilly ankle sox and heels that she keeps on while fucking Daddy.

Your story so far is amazing.

This story definitely needs more chapters, you can work this out with many delicious twists.......keep up the good work

Damn that was hot, but you need to start at the beginning!

More please

rate this story. More please!