All Comments on 'What Should Have Happened'

Love the name!!!😘😝gota pic?

Great first story! Congratulations!

@Elaine_Mature, thank you!! I need to flesh it out more, but I learned some things by writing it.

Very good. I like the implication in the title (which I may be over thinking), "What should have happened". Implication being that this is a fantasy version of a real moment, where in reality she stormed out and he didn't do anything. Looking back she realises she had been acting up, probably he had too, and she wishes he'd used that moment to reassert his control over her body. Could be wrong! Either way its a good first story, thanks.