All Comments on 'What the Butler Saw'

by CBruch

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

But sex is much roo automatic. Too matter-of-fact.

Sex, yes. Erotic? Not really.

Three stars.

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikerabout 1 year ago

Very creative writing and erotic. 5 stars and thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great storyline.

Well written and the sex was meant to be raw not romantic

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A 'retired person' with time on his hands to indulge in my hobby of writing erotica and stories which are based on confessions and fantasies that my many correspondents share with me. Quite happy to include you on my 'distribution list' if you feel the need to unburden your soul.