by psyche_b_mused
Payback is a beyatch! Kelly was AWESOME! I'm glad she got closure. Now she can move on with her life with Victor.
GREAT chapter. Thanks for the short wait.
Confronting her tormentor has to help Kelly exorcise her demons.
Very controlled and well-handled chapter. It's always a pleasure to find out what the cat has dragged in this time.
Now I'm worrying about what Kelly may reveal to Cassie and any nearby mal-wishers via the Skype link, though.
Thanks for continuing the story.
But all good things must come to an end in my perfect world this story would kelp going and going and goinggg. But sadly reality must be faced and I shall go through the mourning pocess when the time comes until then I hope there's still a few more chapters to look forward to. The tender moments of affection between victor and Kelly just make me melt inside teyre always just so perfect and completely unique to them. Continue on with the amazing work!
-mk
I actually love you Psyche_b_mused! You and Soular are by far, two of the most talented authors on Literotica. I immediately fell in love with the plot you created, and furthermore VICTOR CREED! Never has there been such a sexy alpha male, Kelly is one lucky fictional chick lol
Stupid Stan. He craved attention. The worst thing that could happen to him would be for him to be left alone and forgotten. ******
Luxurious every sentence has me hooked
Over and beyond one of the best series on this site
Very addictive, I check for new updates way to often
Exited by everything you do!
this story update has made a crappy horrible week suddenly look a hole lot brighter, thank you! And please keep writing!
I agree A least a Million Stars. This Chapter Was Perfect, yes PERFECT. Wow as happy as I was to read this, I am equally saddened at the thought of this story ending. You are by far my favorite Writer on this site & I look forward to reading more of your writing. Thank you for making my night, Glenna
That was so fucking awesome. Especially the last part. I'm so proud of Kelly and how she was able to turn the tables on that asshole. Once again, the writing style is unique and impeccable, straight to the point yet never shadows any of the minute details. The best story I've ever read on this site. Ever.
I stumbled across your stories 5 days ago and have read them all, start to finish. Youre writing is amazing, Kelly and victors relationship is just brilliant please keep going! You could have some serious success i think! Thank you for these stories xxx
I've read all the stories so far to this. And i got to say . . . Fucking Brilliant. Like what her friend said, I always viewed Sabretooth as a heartless monster. Well, he was til he met Kelly. And I have to admit, hes not weak at all because of her. It only made him stronger and more of a man, and even more dangerous. lol I love these stories! Keep them going! Your writing is quite amazing! Cant wait til the next chapter!
I started reading your story yesterday and I couldnt stop until Id read it all! You are a great writer and if you havent allready you should publish a book. I would buy anything by you in a heartbeat! :-) Just... Wow :-)
Thank God for your writing skills. It's quite a feat. Love the thrill and suspense. When's the next chapter?
I loved how this scene ended. I don't have to worry about her getting sucked into his profession and I love seeing a secure and tangible balance of non-volatile support in their relationship...great job!
I know that it has been said, but after reading everything that you have posted on this site (in a few short days b/c I couldn't stop myself) I feel the need to comment. You have talent. Your writing is detailed, emotional, developed, and enthralling. If this were a book - I would buy it and keep it on the shelf for easy access. Have you ever tried to be published?
I have to admit; I didn't read your story for the sex. While that wasn't bad, the plot, so far, has been absolutely amazing and I just now realized that I have read your entire story in one sitting. It's 2:30 and I regret nothing.
I only wish that Kelly would become a good enough fighter to protect herself if something goes down. After all, the mate of sabretooth should be able to defend herself...even if she shouldn't HAVE to, either.
Loving the story!
nicely written psyche, this one was a good one.
i'm thinking Creed's gonna fuck stan up real bad, and i look forward to reading it.
>:)
k_k
Loved this story. The drama, the pacing, the...everything was "spot on". Many tImes I read longer than I planned because I couldn't walk away. I enjoyed every moment of this story.
This was the first story that I have read like this. It was freakin awesome. I hope that you will be adding more real soon.
This is simply the best multi-part story on this website, hard stop. I have read it at least three times and it loses none of its potency. Bravo!