All Comments on 'What They Don't Know'

The ending was fairly weak. You spent all this time on the trip, but then his time with Paul seemed it was written almost as an afterthought. You would have been better to do two parts and really flesh out the time with Uncle Paul. You could have even added a nice twist where his dad and Paul had also been fucking for years and he was surprised when his dad came for a visit.

One other thing... The first part had a lot of repetition and kind of went back and forth a bit. It was said repeatedly he and Paul did things in secret or if only his parents didn't find out or something. But you alluded to the same info a few times in different ways. Only needed to be said once.

Hot!

I loved this story about an enterprising young man. Hot sex after hot sex. Would have enjoyed some background about how he first started having gay sex. You could easily add more chapters about his upcoming college years. Thanks for sharing.