All Comments on 'What Was She Thinking?'

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Isabel_InnuendeIsabel_Innuendeover 3 years ago

I love a good twist-in-the-tale! Well done.

SyleusSnowSyleusSnowover 3 years ago

Hot, great concept and so well crafted.

GinloverGinloverover 3 years ago

Clever twist and the disjointed thoughts work perfectly for the 750 word challenge. I enjoyed this, well done.

Andi_ChaseAndi_Chaseabout 3 years ago

Ah I love stream of consciousness stories so much!

NoJoNoJoabout 3 years ago

Loved this! Hot, and not a wasted word

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