All Comments on 'What Wicked Games We Play'

Perfect title gives way to perfectly romantic — us, a roller coaster of emotion and drama around believable, 3- dimensional characters (of course, your forte). Especially liked the dynamic between Sylvie and Abby. If you ever developed offshoots would enjoy learning more about Molly and Sylvie and that dynamic — wow. And as a near hopeless romantic, loved how the story played out.

"Our mothers took over, as if we didn't know that was going to happen."

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What a fun and enjoyable tale of lurvve. Thanks!

“toxic harridan” great band name !

You are a master of dialogue. Loved it!

Fast and hectic, enjoyable to the last full stop.

How are you avoiding the AI witch hunt ? So nicely done ...I mean for dyke stuff but ...still :)

Awesome. Not my usual category, but I followed CG here and I didn't regret it. Really great story.

Eleven Pages. Uh...any cliff notes?

That was an fantastic ride, as always your talent writing such tales is outstanding and im learning more and more about the two main islands, this wonderful islands you call home ….. one big scratch is hannahs forced outing and hateful pointings at the financial plan for abbys shop …. Sylvie betrayed hannah as well as abby and even i the gay pride community and you dropped this with ‘please forgive me’ not even one word for hannah - thats not about punishment its about respecting trusting truthfulness or compassion and kicking those with such venom hate like Sylvie just ‘please forgive me’ is …..

i truly enjoyed this five stars are not enough

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Sweet story, thanks ;-)

You do these stories so well and this one is no exception...an easy Five Stars

I can only echo Migbird. As a romantic I loved this. There is a description of Abby and Hannah's first kiss on page three (like melted caramel) which was just so beautiful.

I did wonder whether Sylvie would get her way, or become the heroine but no she found her own place and let the perfect love story develop.

Thank you

Didn’t see that coming with Hannah, enjoyed it enough not to go back to sleep

A long and winding road … What a lovely story! You’re just getting better. ❤️❤️❤️

Loved it but then I do nearly all of yours particularly the New Zealand ones. It is unlike almost anywhere else, the Western Culture with the isolation and I feel you get that in these stories as well as tear jerking romance. Thank you for sharing your great talent.

Loved it! You are a amazing righter. I’ read all of you stories. Great job

Thanks for a very nice and happy story! I nearly missed it, because it is not in my usual category. But your name got me there, CG. I always like your stories. Hey, and you even mentioned Tal Wilkenfeld, that's one of my favorite bass players.

Thank you for this beautiful love story.

I started reading thinking it was awfully long. But by the end I was convinced it ended too soon. Such a wonderful love story.

Another of your dope-ass stories from a long line of them. Write another, please. Randi.

Another perfect story from you, I read everything from you,Cagivagurl

Another great story❤

Great story and great writing.

Fuckin' Chris Isaak.

My cup of tea sorry I'm sure it was well written coming from you. Thanks

Good work.

Awesome story, Enjoyed reading it hope that you write more like this

"Wicked Game" was the first song I ever danced to with my wife (then GF).

As always you nailed it girl !

Hi, it is me again Foghorn (yes, I will get it fixed to be able to sign in again after tax season). I have just left a comment for you on your 20 Years of Lies story. This story led me to sample the other one. I must say that I enjoyed this story much more.

There is still a bit of the formula plot in this story; but, it is far better.

As I explained in the other post, I use to do a lot of writing. It seems we are opposites, there are many stories on this site that use songs as a basis for a story to expand on with detail and emotion. I went the other way...I use real life emotions and detail to try to write a song.

I chose to write songs instead of stories because I can try to tell you something I feel from deep in my soul. You either like it or not...you might even like the words and not have a clue of what I am trying to tell you. THE WORDS MEAN WHAT THEY MEAN TO YOU, regardless of my intent.

What I am trying to tell you that you did a lot better in this story than the other one...write what you feel...don't worry about using a formula to succeed...not every story has a happy ending.

Details are important! If you read my post to the other story, you might understand the way it was written it was not a happy ending. She was simply using him again.

Well done and all around a song! I was very entertained and enjoyed the reading experience!!!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading!!

it took me a while to get into the story but I did and I loved it.

I have to say you managed to convey the feelings behind the story really well, it was like living in her head. EXTREMELY believable, if you said it was a real happenstance I'd take it at face value. 5* and a place in my "Fav Feelings" list.