All Comments on 'Whatever It Takes Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing !!!!

Love this story !!! Please update ASAP!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love it!

Please, please continue! I wish she were a bit more "full of fight" sometimes but other than that, this story is great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh no

Make her fight and fight hard, that is her only option, the other is to take a stool and a length of rope to the garage and find a convenient beam, ("I'd rather stand tall in hell that on my knees in heaven"), Please give her a backbone.

RogueAlanRogueAlanover 9 years ago
enjoying it, keep writing!

good prose... reminds me of pieces by a Nikki Dial in some mens mags when i was a young buck in school... easy on the eyes and capable of writing as well as acting.

you clearly have the writing chops. looking forward to where this grows.

IrolIrolover 9 years ago
please please please

don't stop, we need more, a lot more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Loved it please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

AaaaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaaah...AaaAaaaaaaaaaah....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah..ah...a.....a.......a...a..oh for fuck's sake. How am I supposed to cum now?

Evebroughtanaxthistime

Ps. I hope he's bloody worth it.

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyalmost 7 years ago
Philip is such a sickfuck!!!

Keeping Nicole tied up and confined...like forever!!...Philip is such a sickfuck!!...

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