Whatever It Takes Pt. 08

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"Clean it."

I licked his dick clean as it began to shrivel. I lifted my face from his prick when his grip on my hair relaxed.

Weakly, I leaned back on my heels, breathing hard and watching the two of them. I smiled like a pen dog that had successfully performed a trick. I looked up at him. Sweat gleamed on his face, stained his collar. He fought to catch his breath. He reached down, under my arm pits and half-lifted, half-threw me across the limo. I ended up in a sprawl on the floor of the moving vehicle. Even with my hands bound at the wrists behind me, I quickly scrambled up so my back was against the seat opposite the two men, my tits exposed through the chain vest, and my legs akimbo as I tried to brace myself on the floor of the car. The most degrading thing was not my position, as lewd as it was, but the dregs of his cum on my chin and lips – outward signs of how used and useable I had become on this island.

"We are here," was all Randy said.

"Ladies, we want to show you something that could happen to you if anything goes wrong tonight."

We had stopped before a nondescript building in what appeared to be the low end of a shanty town. There was a line of men out into the dirt street. The line continued up a narrow set of stairs. As we hobbled up on high heels, breasts exposed, arms bound, the men on the steps stared but did not touch. They were afraid of Patrick. Some of the men wore uniforms that were military-like but filthy while others had on soiled work clothes. Some were barefoot, unwashed, and odorous.

At the top of the steps we halted on a landing before a closed door. Patrick and Randy forced the men there to back down the steps.

Patrick gave us an orientation. "I want you to meet someone. The young lady inside is a Dutch U.N. aid worker who has a drug habit. Her name is Sophie Van de Berg. She accepted drugs for which she could not pay cash. This week she is working off her debt. Because she would not go along with the debt repayment process that I suggested and even tried to leave the island, her working conditions are not as nice as yours."

When he opened the door, the three women entered first. When we saw the situation, we tried to back out, but Randy just shoved us into a large room. There were four men in the room, a random sample of what we had seen on the stairs. It was not the room that caught our attention, but the bed in the center of the room, or rather what was happening on the bed.

There was a tall naked white woman there, maybe twenty five or so, with short blonde hair and a well-developed body. She had apparently just had sex with a drunken man that was weaving around trying to put on his pants. The Dutch woman was spread-eagled on bed with her hands cuffed above her to a headboard. One leg was tied to hook on the wall that ran next to the bed. At the junction of her legs there was a pool of cum that spread out on the gray mattress. The pool was fed by a thick stream of fluid trickling out of her crotch, running down her legs into the pool on the mattress. Her large breasts appeared bruised, although the rivers of cum rolling off her breasts muted the vividness of the bruises. Sticky, white scum covered even her face so that it looked like it was covered with a milky mask. I doubted even if her husband, if she had one, could recognize her. She gasped and coughed out more cum onto her breasts.

Her eyes were open and knowing as they stared at us. But what caught my attention was that even her long eyelashes had globs of cum clinking to them. I thought she was going to say something, but whatever it might have been was lost forever as another man climbed on the bed.

Shelley giggled, a totally out-of-place reaction to the scene that we were meant to witness. When I turned to her, even in the dim light of the room, I could see that her eyes were moving in and out of focus. The drug had affected her already. Danelle had a shocked look on her face so I knew that she was still processing information and not as far gone as Shelley.

The action continued. A black man on the bed straddled Ms. Sophie Van de Berg's chest. He gripped her straw blonde hair to propel her now-open mouth back and forth over his cock. The man gripped a handful of hair in his right hand to steady her head. Then he face fucked her We could hear her gag as his thrusts battered against the her throat. I hoped that Patrick had given her versed so would be zoned out even if following instructions.

Patrick broke our reverie, "Seen enough?"

They herded us down the stairs to the car. The men parted as we passed and then filled in behind us. All of them crowded forward to have sex with a near-comatose white woman who made the mistake of pissing Patrick off. We got the message. Each of us silently resolved to do whatever it took not to end up like the blonde U.N. worker who would probably never recover fully either mentally or physically.

As we neared the car, Patrick held me back a bit. "Elaine, Randy told me that you wanted to talk. I think I know what you want to talk about, and I am pleased that you want to expand our business relationship. I will see you early tomorrow morning. That is, I will see you if your performance this evening in front of this esteemed group brings credit on the Doll's House. If anything goes wrong tonight, then we may still have a conversation but it will be a very different discussion."

I understood what he wanted to communicate. This evening I was to get in, get fucked, get out, no fuss. Easy to say but maybe hard to do. Possibly I should have drunk the entire versed cocktail – it might well be better to be drug-controlled and mindlessly following instructions with a guaranteed memory of what those instructions involved.

At this point in my involuntary service as a whore, I had reached four conclusions:

  1. Despite their threats, the criminal organization that had entrapped me and was selling my body would not seriously harm or kill me so long as I behaved in a way that brought them no publicity and satisfied their clients. Anything else would bring FBI agents and reporters down to Jamaica and that would be bad for business.

  1. Just because I would be released did not eliminate the risk that Patrick and his minions and/or other associates would attempt to blackmail me or request favors in the future. There were too many videos and photos in too many hands to conclude anything other than I was at risk of having to be obligated to criminals for the rest of my life.

  1. The only choice I had of eliminating or reducing their power over me was to join them and gain enough information on these criminals and rapists that I would be able to counter-threaten them with exposure of some portion of their business operations if they threatened to threatened me with exposure of what I had to do to survive here in Jamaica. I had to establish a situation of mutually assured destruction so that their leverage over me would be mitigated or eliminated.

  1. My only way into this organization was through Patrick. I had to appear credible enough in his eyes to have him sponsor me as a willing recruit to the organization. Whatever it took I would need a recommendation from Patrick if I were to be able to gather enough information to achieve this desirable state of mutually assured destruction.

With those thoughts firmly in mind, I followed Patrick and the rest into the building for the 'slave auction.'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great story, when will it continue?

Siska100Siska100almost 4 years ago

I really enjoyed the story.

We can see ourselves in Elaine's shoes and live her stay at Patrick's Doll's House.

I was looking forward reading about the auction and subsequent events.

But I have to say I've given up; I guess all of us will have to imagine an ending to your story and that's too bad; we shouldn't have to!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

pity you have not finished the good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excllent

Feels like we get to know the proponent. Not just wam bam thank you mam. Can't wait to see the effect on her future life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
very good

One of the best that i have read in this year.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

where is the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Whatever it takes....

…. she'll be trained to do. Love it so far. Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I like the way this going

LostnFoundBinLostnFoundBinalmost 5 years ago
Such opportunity...too much waste...no real content

Here goes...

It’s still Wednesday in this story and even worse the day not even close to over yet. Yes that's right it will be at least four chapters and so far you’ve already created 16 Literotica pages, and who knows how many more, just to recap one day…why?

At the beginning of each chapter you provide us a synopsis of the previous content to catch everyone up and then you run us through the cast of characters. Two quick notes about this both constructive I hope, first where is Heather - she sounds important yet here we are in chapter eight without any content related to her in the last four plus chapters (chap 3 page 2). Shouldn’t she be doing something? Even in the first three she’s just running around looking for hook ups. Shouldn’t we the readers get a clue as to what’s been up with her for the last 4 days? I won’t even ask about Paul. Second, the synopsis isn’t even accurate – look at the top of page one for chap eight. No mention of a chapter seven. And in chapter seven you noted events that were to occur but didn’t – those became the chapter eight notes – AND THOSE TO NEVER HAPPENED. Hell chapter eight ended with Patrick saying it might happen tomorrow – that will be chapter nine or ten depending on how long you drag out yet another sex scene still happening on the same day all those other sex scenes happened.

Also did you re-read chapter one very first paragraph – you wrote "Elaine, just a mere two days ago did you ever think you would be giving a blow job to man whom you hardly met - a black man who never got past eighth grade? Life can take some strange twists, can't it?" That was all part of her prologue to this story. Yet finally this line comes out here in chapter eight and ITS NOT THE SAME LINE!!!! Just to recap you wrote, “Elaine, just a mere three days ago did you ever think you would be giving a blow job to man whom you just met. Life can take some strange twists, can't it?" This is simple copy and paste work to keep your continuity accurate so why didn’t you?

Finally since you believe it is so important to track every scene that earns a penny (maybe it’s tied to Elaine’s banking background…whatever). Let’s track how Wednesday is going for Elaine. Started the day needing $9,080 after her rough Tuesday…

Patrick BJ + 3 staff fucked, sucked, ass fingered, saw cards of herself showing full photo + she can’t sit due to ass fuck with Doug Aldrich + Bill straight fuck + Kid gets all three holes (even though 1 hour 20 minutes ago she couldn’t sit due to the damage to her ass from Doug) plus pics + 2 Asian bondage boys full service and a movie taken of her (8 guys in 3 hours and climbing) + BOOM Elaine vs Jessie round one + Argentinian fuck and anal (again damaged and re-damaged – screams of PAIN) + Bogart looking guy gets a BJ and right back to anal (seriously?!) then a fuck plus some more clamps + pasta with ashes + BOOM Elaine vs Jessie round two + Animal and tossing his salad, pussy eating, AND AGAIN ANAL!!! + suicidal thoughts + 3some boys no anal but everything else plus the hustler and voyeurweb news have now made her famous worldwide + Patrick BJ V2

Wednesday so far has been 15 clients and her ass is destroyed and yet she earned $5,025 not a bad day. Now we are off to the charity ball where 50-60 men await and Elaine is hoping only 18 will fuck her for $2,500 - sad math for someone with some rather strong college degrees. And let me check once more…no...nope…note here…none…yep rechecked ZERO condoms?

Hopefully you can see that the sex scenes are repetitive. And that you have so many creative possibilities with this story that that you should not be stuck in this rut of making wash-rinse-repeat content chapter after chapter.

Think about where she truly is at mentally and what does matter to her. The threats don’t matter (death might but she was already suicidal in just one day – so not much). Her husband doesn’t matter. Heather doesn't matter. Diseases don’t matter. The pictures and videos on the internet don’t matter. Her ass don’t matter. What does? And add in the other people who should matter. Get back to writing an erotic novel not Elaine Jone's Diary

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