All Comments on 'Whatever Your Heart Desires Ch. 04'

by AngelCherysse

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DeborahAnneDeborahAnneover 12 years ago
ouch

would love to see the party those two had with you, actually I would love to suck your pussy when they were through.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great twist in the story.

Wo0odWo0odover 19 years ago
Love your work

Great story and I can't help but wonder if Danni is in on the "rape" and his own disappearance.

tgirl4utgirl4uover 19 years ago
Bravo

A well written piece by an accomplished author. My hats off to you.

ed1ed1over 19 years ago
Great!!!

Great story I can wait for the next chapter. Keep this one going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Finally some justice

At last the cheating wife is caught red-handed with two lovers. Her loving husband, who allowed her to manipulate him into being feminized finally shows some backbone, walks out. I seriously hope that the story provides a happy ending for Dan/Danielle, and hopefully it will end with a divorce of the couple, and break the cheater's heart. The writing and the story is well.

I'd prefer a new catagory: cheating spouses and place and all other infidelity stories in that, as opposed to Loving Wifes stories, where it is a love story between a man and his wife - not adultery. Jeff Lowenstein

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