by Chiara23
Really great story (Go Canada!)
Perfect timing as well. I had been wondering about the headaches until the second last line, then it all clicked, went back to re-read her first sighting of him... Very well done!
You've really done a good job on this one!
Skating close to the edge of revealing what caused Darcy's headaches, but holding off until near the end.
Plus, setting it in Canada (a place few authors here use) gives it a nice change.
(though I don't think you put enough "eh"s in there, eh? ^.~)
Great story lots of potential, can not wait to read the next chapter
I love the way you put the story together, not revealing the shared connection until much later. The name twist was a lovely touch.