All Comments on 'Wheels On The Bus'

I like where this is going hope they all get a turn, including the football team and the nerdy virgin.

I enjoyed this

Assuming they will spend hours on bus the threat of getting pregnant will confuse her in a primal way I am sure

I am looking forward to the goth girls getting involved. Keep it up with the detail.

Amazing start, hoping for a few more chapters.

Well, she likes it so much it looks like the rest of the Goth gang will think of some creative ways of taking her. Then when the bus get to the hotel, they leave her in the bus and the driver takes a turn. Then the football team and many others. When she arrives back at school, she will be a cock crazed nerd girl and a sensation on the internet.

that was great! can't wait to see what else they get up to for the rest of the bus ride...

Awesome

Amazing start ... but feels incomplete. Yes, the gradual shift from "harmless" bullying (verbal) to "severe" physical degradation (throwing out clothes, helplessly handcuffed to seat - how should she exit the bus?) is convincingly and entertainingly written (if You like the tags). But this story just ends - with no plot highlight nor convincing closure. Of course, this can easily be remedied in future chapters. But it is also a bit surprising as this chapter with its three pages is quite long, and a decent writing style raises expectations. There might be a better plot composition towards the end.

Please make more chapters

I can't wait for the next chapter. I would love to see how she gets used by the rest of the goth gang. And maybe she just becomes thier little goth slave.

This reminds me too much of the lesser beings I had to ride school buses with. Happy to say that on more than one ride I had the opportunity to use physical force on the inferior beings who treated many of the girls like the one in this story. It's hard not to feel superior to bullies, but great fun to show them what cowards they were, and I'm sure they still are. Theŕe was one consolation. More than one girl was kind enough to show me her gratitude--- along with more feminine parts of their bodies. Maybe I should be grateful to the assholes. If it had not been for them I might still be a virgin!

Nicely done. Love the whole situation of being essentially kidnapped. Although I'm amazed no one noticed the clothes going out the window