All Comments on 'When a Plan Comes Together'

Brilliant story.

I attempted to give 5 stars but my finger pressed 4 stars by mistake.

Favourited as well

Good work.

Hot as fuck.

Nice, i could see where it was going but it still kept me interested in exactly how we would get there.

Great, sister is kind of a bitch, but it worked out. You need one more chapter when they are swapping & the women make the guys fuck each other !

dumb as a box of rocks

Love your stories. Keep writing

love all your stories, keep them coming_ literally

Hi Miss D Mena

As ever enjoyed your story. Only 8 new stories this year, is it getting harder or are you just busy with other things?

Parts of the story were great, but at the end, I didn't like the continued dishonesty. The only way they have a chance at not imploding is communication. Adding another secret between the women just indicates it's going to melt down and brought the rest of the story down.