by LucyCanyon
I love the perspective of each other giving their comments, despite others. This whole series is beyond hot. Can't wait for more. Thank you!
Interesting story, could use some proofreading, little things here & there that detract from the overall story. But still a good read. Are those breasts forms fantasy?
Could use a bit of Proofreading as one commenter said, but the story itself is very hot though loved reading it from both sides!!!!
Enjoying getting both perspectives. I also am appreciative that although John/Lucy is adapting to the feminization he is not interested in interacting with males sexually. Too many writers seem to feel that any man interested in feminization must secretly want to be fucked by guys.