All Comments on 'When Dams are Broken Ch. 01'

Very hot for for Kei to be his first time!

great

What a hot story! I can’t wait to read where this goes. I so hope Michael gets fucked!

Very hot. Bring on the 2nd chapter quickly. I hope they take turns each fucking the other so Michael gets the full m2m experience from his younger handsome lover.

This was so fucking hot, I'm almost out of breath myself. Wished the first guy I gave a blowjob to was as loving as Kei instead of the selfish pig that I had. Looks like Michael is in good hands for losing his virginity in chapter #2. Great story, hot story, thanks. MLF

I'm really sorry for that. I wish you had a better experience too. Everyone deserves a good one, except selfish people like the guy you just mentioned. Hope you feel better! And stop giving yourself to guys who don't deserve you :)

We all want our first time to be like this! I can't wait to hear about the exploits in the hotel room

Reads like a dream sequence. Delightful.

So sweet and hot at the same time…for me just perfectly describes what it’s like to go from being curious to just totally understanding that worshipping cock will now define your life…

Wifey was sweet but is of course history now…

This is so poorly written that I had to give up before reaching the sex, if there is any. Please employ an editor with real language skills and or take some writing classes.