All Comments on 'When Darkness Falls'

As with all TxRad stories there is a long and exploratory lead-in that keeps you reading because you cannot wait to see what comes next. When this story stopped after page 2 I immediately went to his index of stories to find part 2. But, at this time there is no part 2. Hopefully he will continue the story as the storyline can be exploited for many parts and i hope that TxRad brings the same sexuality to When Darkness Falls as he brought to Wild Child, which is still one of my all time favorites.

Thank you TxRad for many hours of joyful reading.

Time for the rest of this story. It's awesome so far.

Great start to an ongoing Romance, would love to read more......

Damn this was fun. Eagerly hoping their is a part 2 in the future

‘ideas on your statues’. I hope you were trying to say ‘ideas on your status’.

‘The contrast between her white hand and his darkly tanned one was very marked.’ Not sure how either of them would see that, since it’s night time.

‘…pealing in some strange places…’ That would be ‘peeling’.

I’m an albino myself, do not tan at all, never have, and yes, I most certainly have to be careful about exposure to the sun. But nowhere near to the extreme as depicted here. I have led an active life, including outdoors. Fishing and swimming. Biking. Yardwork. Any decently high SPF sunscreen protects me just fine from sunburn. If you ever do a sequel, she should find out that she can get out in daylight with a few simple precautions.

Nice story, though the odds that the first people she meets are such a liberated bunch seem kind of low.