All Comments on 'When Fantasy Meets Reality'

Perfect

Thank God it was not another February Sucks follow up!

5

A new favorite! Enough of that other crap.

Great short story R69! One of the best complete 750 word shorts i have read in awhile. It didn’t leave asking questions or for more info. Well done! 5*

Certainly a fine story, but I have this odd feeling that I may have heard something like this before. But that woman's dress was blue.....

This is how you write this type of story, Georgie boy.

wHAT A GREAT STORY! NICE SHORT CHANGE OF PACE!

Okay, so a happy ending to a February Sucks style story. Not too much excitement when a husband and wife behave honorably, but an interesting tale nonetheless.

Nice flip side of that oft riffed on story

"Marcus". Yeah right. :)

But thank you for not naming the women "Linda", "Dee" or "Ellen"!

February didn't suck in this one... :)

Who else thinks this is the way GA’s (February Sucks) nonsense should have ended, at least we wouldn’t have had to endure the interminable alternatives.

Nice one and an actual loving wife, who’d a thunk it.

Good stuff. D

Good stuff. D

5* Short, effective story about a truly faithful and loving couple. No GA February crap. Woo Hoo!

Wow, good job!

Fuck off, Marc LaValliere!

Well done. Great plot and characters with tension and possible conflict. a strange ending for a "Loving Wifes" category, but it's nice to see a happy ending.

Nice story.

Curious to know if Amy would have taken Marcus's hand if Nadia hadn't wrapped herself around John?

Really nice quite a good story packed into very few words.

Hey, you resisted the BTB shit-wallow! 5 for that alone.

I was hoping it didn't turn out to be another "February Sucks" story and thanks that it didn't. 5 BIG ONES!

I was hoping it didn't turn out to be another "February Sucks" story and thanks that it didn't. 5 BIG ONES!

And there we have it sports fans. The twist on the George Anderson classic that has been lingering in the background that nobody has dared to write.

Thanks Regguy69. Got a laugh when you didn't go down the road so often taken. Half way through I was wondering why there was no salutation to the overdone sequels. Nice effort and thanks again.

Doc

Wow, that was outstanding! Like Boyd Percy, I was worried that we were heading into LaValliere territory, but you ended up turning this into something completely different--a true loving wife story. NICE!

This is the way February Sucks would have gone given the background of Jim and Linda.

Fantastic story. Loved it. Every man wants a wife that feels about him the way Amy feels about John. Every now and then I get to read a story that just feels like in is supposed to. 5-stars. Thanks for sharing.

February sucks done right. 5 stars.

And that's the way it should be 5*

A proper ending.

Well put together and a satisfactory ending. I heartily agree with the comment that it was great that it didn't end like that "February" horror with all its sequels. 4* for uncommon good sense.

I agree with BP. Thanks. 5/5

Excellent

Phew.... like many others I thought that this was going the way of February Sucks. Great story - thank you!

that is true love

This is precisely why February Sucks didn't deserve to even be read, much less garner hundreds of equally broken 'sequels'.

Well done! Thank you.

An instant classic. 5/5

This story is why stories that many of us, myself included, want the "right" thing to happen, are right in NOT doing the "right thing." The right thing is dreadfully dull.

Bout damn time.

Finally a sensible one of these

Ah, but what if he was a football hero?

The way a true wife acts, not a February Sluts wife.... although I would rethink their friendship with their table mates, especially Gail.

5 star story. That's how February Sucks should have ended. I'm sure the cucks won't like this one.

Excellent story R69! No degenerate CUCKS, No wimp husbands AND "NO CHEATING WHORE WIVES" professing to love their husbands while they sneak off to screw some wife stealing AssHole (i.e Linda the SLUT / February Sucks)!

For a moment I feared I would see yet another variation on February Sucks (ok some of them are great but enough already) but this was awesome and one of the more true to life things I have read in here. Well written, tight with a sense of humour thax for that.

Aaah, finally. An antidote to 'February'.

Gives me warm fuzzies all over.

The red dress doesn't need shredding like the blue one.

Won't need endless follow-ups like the other because it's complete and there's no resolution left open

Marcus’ Cuckeeze just didn’t work on Amy. Great story about a real loving wife.

just like most successful marriages. Thanks for the effort.

Excellent!

At first I was groaning thinking ANOTHER 'February Sucks' ? but I was pleasantly surprised; a faithful loving couple in the LW genre - how novel.

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5*****, Hooyah, Salutes....

that is how a wife should react

Make sure Linda reads this story, ey.

Yes, an excellent example of how it works in a functioning partnership that is provided with love, respect and loyalty!

What spouses say and profess to each other is, of course, not all that they think. It was clear Amy loved John and was relieved the night didn’t progress further into dangerous territory. However, relief can coexist with regret. I feel certain in a quiet moment alone with her thoughts, Amy frequently relives her intimate dance, is secretly pleased Marcus found her attractive, and wonders over and over what it would have been like to fuck Marcus. An interesting question worth asking is, as she explores these thoughts, does she have even a teeny, tiny trace of regret?

Thought it was going to be a play on February sucks but much better outcome

Thank you, RG! This is the way a true life, loving couple, deal with temptation!

To KitDeLuca,

Your observations were spot on. I would assume both of them would relive those moments when they could have gone in a different direction, it would be a natural thing to do. Fantasizing about what might have happened is harmless as long as it doesn't become an obsession. I'd like to believe my guys would have no problem being honest with each other about their feelings.

Thank you for your thoughtful post.

Regguy69

Kinda, sorta an antithesis to George Anderson's mythic "February Sucks !"... and well done!

"5" from here...

Wow! This is a great story. I read in some of the other comments that Linda should read this story as well. That was my thought exactly as I was reading the story this is how a good wife should react when it's celebrity ask them to dance.

Wow! A normal, loyal, loving couple. Thanks for the surprising, but welcome break.

V good, but again, just 2-bits' worth.

Great Romantic Short Story

And that's how NORMAL couples doesn't end up in idiotic situations like what happened in "February Sucks."

Thank you for the levity, author; evidently, this place needs some of it sometimes.

And that is how a normal couple do it, and, how those February stories should have ended. But without them, we wouldn’t have so much content to enjoy. 5*

Almost another mark linda and Jim story I hate that story

Saw your kind comment on my tale and I thought I would take a look at some of yours. I liked this very much! Sometimes, they actually love each other.

Nice story with a surprising ending. Glad for it. 4 stars Bob

Disappointing

You better watch out for Gail. She's going to be that "friend" who thinks "it's only one night out of all your years together."

Surprising end to the story, which I liked. I was expecting the actor to spend the night with Amy, damned what John thinks. Glad I'm wrong.

Wow. Actual fidelity. Amazing.

An antidote to February.

Thank you

You get an extra star from me because of the fidelity. Novel concept here in LW.

Hooked

I liked the tenor of the story and no hook up. I would also bet if she was in the place on a girls night out she would have fucked Washington's brains out.

More like what I would expect in real life from February sucks. Maybe even further then I'd expect but that's closer to how I would see things playing out typically.

Nice

Very nice tale, with a commendable outcome. I awarded four stars, but on second thought elevated it to five.

JPB

Why would he leave his party to join them.

I would have problems

See, that is how it is supposed to be. And in only 1812 words. Lovely story.

A story of a real wife for a change. With the outcome of the majority of stories on this site say 98% , you would believe most wives in the world have their own selfish agender and would gladly leave the husband behind knowing the courts have a bias for the wife in a breakup.

Very refreshing. Loved it. A dance is one thing. A night cap in a hotel room is quite another thing. They both did the right thing. Bravo. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s

I sincerely hope this (or close to this) is how it would happen in real life.

The outcome is so much better than 'February Sucks'. This woman is a real wife, an equal partner with respect for her man--while he shows her the same respect.

As it should be ;)

yes indeed good stuff

Loved that while the husband let her dance with her screen idol, she didn't take advantage & stayed true to her husband & marriage. 4 stars Bob

5+ stars

Wonderful, 10 stars! It was a really pleasant surprise, I thought we may have a Feb Sucks style ending!

Clever. The author understands what makes for true love.

The Hoary Cleric

Refreshing

Wow what a rare occasion to find a story about a actual loving wife in the loving wife category

straddling a line in this one.

Good story. To be fair Marcus was not a prick like Marc L in FS. He offered something with an exchange, i.e. a swap. When the husband saw his wife about to explode with Nadia all over him, he politely refused and Marcus moved on. Being an actor he probably is self entitled. But he controlled it. The husband and wife passed their test. 5 stars. If only because the predator, at least appeared to not be a predator.

Good one, boss. I like, no, love a happy ending. People are human, but humans can make good and bad decisions. They made good ones. Kudos to them. The Bear loved it. 7 stars, because it is worth it. I agree with all other comments. Keep writing, pal.

The BEAR

Wow a loving wife story about a actual loving wife I'm shocked

Interesting, I'm little surprised though cause this story is a rarity for this category its a story about a loving wife in the loving wife category that's rare this category needs a lot more stories about a loving wife instead of a cheating slut or cheating asshole and yes even if it's just a 1 time thing if the wife cheats she's still a cheating slut and if he cheats he's still a cheating asshole as myself and my husband says cheating isn't a mistake

Happy endings are OK, if there was no physical cheating or if the sacrifice was sufficiently grand

5 stars from Xluckylee for an unusual story in this category. Thank you for the change of pace.

This story is a rarity and the fact that it is rare is a good thing. This being a fictional, erotic story site lends itself to fictional tales of the strange, erotic, and wicked nature of our imaginations. Like Hollywood, we enjoy the experience of the fantastical and the extravagance of characters in a show. There bis nobody wanking to a couple on a date, a family vacation, or the goings on of a normal workplace. And we can all agree that is a good thing.