by evrtxn
I have been a Literotica fan around the time when it was new. Most new writers start off a little slow, and get better the more they write. Or they could write til the end of time and never get better (although I admire their many efforts. I've tried to write some sensible stories through the years, but I don't get far mainly because I get too aroused (TMI)!
Your first story however, I predict, will get good reception from Lit Fans. You obviously love writing or you wouldn't be so darn good at it. Looking forward to more of your writing.
a great story. you got me going and helped me finish. Glad to see this is Chapter 1. Please continue to share your fantasy for this and any other adventures,
This is an awesome story. Great story lines and plot. Well written for your 1st addition to Literotica after being a reader only. Look forward to MORE !
An excellent first effort. I loved it and am looking forward to seeing more from you.
Very Nice Initial Story!
I really enjoyed reading the in depth introduction, which is often unusual for a first time author. The storyline is also a bit unusual, which make an interesting read. This introductory chapter definitely captured my attention, therefore I am anxiously awaiting Ch. 02., following Gina's / Tammy's future exploits!!
Very yummy and very well written. It's good to read a story about nothing more that the two women enjoying each other as women. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Thank you!
Great beginning just started this series and cannot wait to see where it does.