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This was wonderful writing; delicious characters, a strong ability to show rather then merely tell your readers what to see, or feel, or think-just a total pleasure to read. I loved the "twist" towards the end of her cyber Master relinquishing her to a rw Master. And I have to admit, I winced and giggled a bit when she was trying to put the nipple clamps on and yanked the first one off. That's one mistake a girl doesn't make twice!

I loved it!! I do hope you keep going with this. Your writing is so descriptive, I could picture it clear in my head, it made my whole body shiver and my pussy soaked with need.

wow..i have read you before and am not only not disappointed.. but highly highly aroused...sweet and demanding at the same time