All Comments on 'When He's Gone'

Interesting story, thank you for your work. My only suggestion was that proofreading started to get lax towards the end. For example, you wrote that Jack scoffed his food, which makes no sense. I'm sure you meant scarfed. There were a few other mistakes, which sadly stand out more in a work of this quality.

I have to agree, that on re-reading I found a few proofreading errors. Sorry for that. However, although Anonymous is correct that scarfed is a legitimate word, in East End English the word is used to mean eating quickly;

scoff verb (2)

scoffed; scoffing; scoffs

Definition of scoff (Entry 3 of 3)

transitive verb

1 : to eat greedily scoffed dinner

Omg!!

Please continue this story.

And where did her husband disappear to?

Yes there were a couple of proofreader errors, but in no terms did they take away from superb writing and great story line.

Non con is the only genre i read and this was perfect. Not too cruel, very much predicament, no violence, no gratuitous ugly name calling, (the over used, boner killer, in my opinion, slut, cum bucket, call me Sir, etc.)

I am just sitting here with baited breath waiting patiently for the (hopefully) second installment. I do realize a piece this good, with depth of character and action takes time. But....please...please continue.