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Anonymousabout 11 years ago*****
You are good. Nice pacing. Believable dialogue. Good characters. Well developed tension. Nice possibilities to go various ways so don't stop now. Again, to use one of your wonderful understated British phrases, Well Done.
fridayamalmost 11 years agoI think you got this
"just right":) Nicely paced, and I believed the characters. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agofantastic
beautiful writing, perfect pace- and lets just say it did the trick!
MarkHughesalmost 11 years agoOutstanding
Great detail and characterisation. Very convincing. Highly erotic and slightly disturbing. Brilliant, thank you.
parker3522over 10 years agoNicely Done
Erotic, well paced, I liked her subserviant attitude. Her arousal building and building.
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