by LeanneSinclair
Erotic, well paced, I liked her subserviant attitude. Her arousal building and building.
Great detail and characterisation. Very convincing. Highly erotic and slightly disturbing. Brilliant, thank you.
beautiful writing, perfect pace- and lets just say it did the trick!
"just right":) Nicely paced, and I believed the characters. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you.
You are good. Nice pacing. Believable dialogue. Good characters. Well developed tension. Nice possibilities to go various ways so don't stop now. Again, to use one of your wonderful understated British phrases, Well Done.