All Comments on 'When Lightning Strikes'

by ShelbyDawn57

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Anthony1965Anthony1965over 1 year ago

I absolutely loved this story. Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another well written story always enjoy a great read before bed and when I seen you had a new story I had to read

LunaTardLunaTardover 1 year ago

I loved this story! So sweet and sentimental.... awesome job!

robertw61robertw61over 1 year ago

I loved this story! So sweet and sentimental

xDarkAngel0xDarkAngel0over 1 year ago

Love you Shelby, you are an inspiration. I love your writing. The people seem so real, and I think for those of us that have had "sort of similar experiences" can whole-heartedly relate to. The elation and the fear in equal measure make it feel so real. XXXXX

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Would love to read more great story

njlaurennjlaurenover 1 year ago

What a cute story...would love to hear more about christy and Pete.

Mimi_FLMimi_FLover 1 year ago

Loved it would really love a part 2

CaseyjoCaseyjoover 1 year ago

Absolutely wonderful as always!

Now as a long haul truck driver myself I feel as I should clarify a couple of points in order to educate the general public. Maggie's truck is extremely rare. Only the oversized custom trucks have a toilet and a sink. Although it does make sense that a female driver would own one. Secondly, 2-3 hour or more unload times are closer to reality. Shelby writes in perfect world scenarios so I will give this one a pass.

Please continue to assault our senses with your heavenly poetic words. Many of your devoted readers, like myself, are super excited when you post a new story. So please keep them coming

eduk8meplseduk8meplsover 1 year ago

There are days, plenty of them lately, when I need a happy ending, and to shed a happy tear or two. You've come through again in such a good way. Thanks for the another fine story, Shelby.

Vanessa

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very nicely done. A little bit on the sappy side for me, this has got to be one of the HARDEST things to ever go through. This was awful easy!

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonover 1 year ago

Such a beautiful story. When I first started to read I was loving the whole road trip, (nothing like a good road trip, movie, story, song, etc.) And of course, a perfect romantic ending, a perfect fantasy, thank you, Shelby...

MattiemaybeMattiemaybeover 1 year ago

A wonderful, romantic story. Loved Maggie and Abby - and Christy’s dad. Sure - a bit bump in the road free…but we’ve all got enough bumps so…I enjoyed a happy story.

DaymosDaymosover 1 year ago

A very good story as always :) The dad surprice was priceless. It was such a good read that it was over before I knew it :) If you'd go more into details and stretch it out a bit, it has a potential to be a book. Maybe not a action packed bestseller, but one that I would love to read either way. Keep up the good work.

Freebird6996Freebird6996over 1 year ago

Well, am nearing the end of a journey I have enjoyed immensely and am wanting more and hope in your heart, you are writing more to please and make happy people like myself...Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Once again, an AMAZING story! You are so talented. I would love to read something longer. Have you ever thought about writing a novel?

goofypgoofypover 1 year ago

Nice read. Thanks for sharing.

Carolyne131Carolyne13112 months ago

The story needs to continue and expand with the characters. It would fill out this story. The end of the story came too fast with too many unanswered questions. The tempo of the beginning was exciting but needs to be filled out with additional chapters.

JackiemichelleJackiemichelle12 months ago

Great story. I wish you would let us know how you want it to end. Love reading your stories

SuddenlyMaddieSuddenlyMaddie8 months ago

This is so sweet. The love and acceptance from Christy's parents had me crying so hard I couldn't continue reading. I dried my eyes and finished, but oh my God, this is beautiful. Thank you. I needed this today.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

The dad's reaction was beautifully written.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Another well written wonderful story. Amazed where you get all your inspiration? Penny x

allie_laceyallie_laceyabout 2 months ago

Maggie is always the most loving, understanding and amazing human in your stories. I love that you keep Maggie's soul the same in each of your stories.

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Authors Notes: Lots going on right now. Wanted to give everyone a big heads up. The authors got together and challenged each other to write stories in exactly 750 words. Never one to back down from a fight, I wrote and submitted six. They span several categories; 2 Sci-Fi/Fa...