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Click hereAfter we made our goodbyes to my parents, I held Dex's hand on the way to the car. He kissed me after opening the door for me.
"Is this happening too fast, Dex?" I asked hugging him tightly.
"I don't think so, Mel. You've brought feelings out of me that I forgot I had. Something magical happened the other night. We both felt it, whatever it was and if it were up to me, I'd never let you go."
I hugged him harder.
"Dex, I'm falling in love with you. Please don't hurt me."
He laughed. I was being sensitive and tender opening my heart to him, and he laughed.
"Melissa, I'm falling for you too. I'll never hurt you. I can promise you that."
I relaxed, "Merry Christmas, Dexter."
"Merry Christmas and a happy future, Melissa."
- COMMENTS
miqael694 months agoYou have a delightfull way of leaving short that the reader can just use their own imagination for the rest of the story. Thank you.
ScottishTexanalmost 2 years agoOMG. How many times do we have to read about some girl falling for the chiseled guy with the six pack abs? BORING 😴 😴 😴! Oh yeah, I forgot that it's the biggest lie that every woman tells, "Looks don't matter". Well at least we can say that your story is very factual. Except for Dex...
You see, here's the ugly truth that no one ever talks about. The "Adonis" type guys like Dex already know that women are going to throw themselves at their feet. So there's not a single one of them who will treat a girl with dignity and respect, unless they're going through the motions in order to 'set the hook' or impress the parents. 🤔 But as soon as they get what they want, then the real beast will make its appearance.
Nice guys always finish last. Just like they weren't present in your story either. Next time please write about an actual believable character. 1/5
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoSorry I didn’t see this at Christmas, but then I like Christmas all year long.
5*
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