All Comments on 'When 'Not' Dates Lead to Trust'

Thank you for a wonderful, well-written happy story, I am grateful.

A fine storyline, but I felt this one was a little compressed and needed a bit of embellishment along the way.

Don't know if I hit "submit" for my previous comment so, in case I didn't, I said this was an excellent storyline once more, but felt a little compressed and needed a bit of embellishment along the way in certain areas.