All Comments on 'When One Day We are Gone Ch. 02'

So many fun and exciting levels to this 5 Star story. It covers lots of the erotic and kink filled desires of the sexual adventures that people make choices about everyday. It is well constructed and has great characters having fun and trouble making choices to reach there sexual desires regardless of how it may seems to others. Just great entertainment. Thanks for you time to develop and publish. Cheers

The constructive feedback(?) I have after reading: this femdom series has me fanning myself and I can tell I will be soon changing the double n for a double p. I am glad that Cassie found Syn when she was lost, and I am looking forward to the reputation she will establish.

Excellent, hope that she gets to turn lily into a stool.

The constant back and forth between mewling sub and 'domme' doesn't work, sorry.

In one chapter, you paint a cuckquean who gets off on the humiliation even if she can't deal with the aftermath.

in another, you paint someone with domme leanings that are completely at odds with the previous. It's like you have two different characters with the same name and picking up a different story chapter to chapter.

It would be better if you focused on one side, sub or domme, for her.

Oh man - I admit I was a little uncertain about how much I would enjoy the femdom element alongside the cuckquean content, but I'm on board, loved this chapter, and keen to see how her two lives intersect. Also after chapter 18, I'm relieved to know that we get to check in on Quinn in the future - that hurt my heart, poor guy.

Yes I can this will be another great set of chapters to this fine story. Cassie or Should I say Mistress Grace getting some great revenge against her husband and Specially Lily..

Great story! Very interested in where this is going

I'm really enjoying this story so excited for the next chapter!!

Wouldn't it have been so Wonderful to find out that the woman being used as Furniture was actually Lily !!

Ok bit confused is Cassie going to turn into a cuckquean or is Lily going be Cassie's slave

Love to see Cassie turn Lily into her pet and walk her around on a leash that would be great revenge!

I thought that Cassie was going to end up as Lily's bitch but now I think it might be the other way around!!! Whatever happens, I'm looking forward to it

I thought that Cassie was going to end up as Lily's bitch but now I think it might be the other way around!!! Whatever happens, I'm looking forward to it

I thought this story was about Cassie becoming a cuckquean but after reading this it now seems like it's a revenge story it's confusing

When is the next chapter coming???

More hold ups in the approvals queue. Guessing the Lit moderators are a little understaffed. I'm publishing every Friday

“Do harm, but no permanent harm.” Great line. Almost as good as “Do not confuse cruelty with lack of love.” But I would argue in a noncon story permanent harm of some kind comes with the territory. It is the finality of permanent harm that puts someone above someone else. That shows who is true top, and who true bottom. As a malesub, suffering permanent psychosexual harm at the hands of a femdom, is the ultimate (terrifying) fantasy.