All Comments on 'When the Call Comes In'

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Anonymousabout 2 years ago

Why not have them shit all over each other too, then brush their teeth in feces? Fuck dude, find a qualified medical professional, stat.

muskyboy about 2 years ago

Lacked all the love and romance of the first chapter. No real emotions and no likeable characters. Totally wrecked a romantic good story, turned it into an emotionless orgy.

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Corporate drone by day, writer in various genres by night. Literotica is the only place I publish my erotic stories. It’s purely a hobby, so sometimes it has to take a back seat to work, but I will always try to return when I have time. Comments and feedback are welcome.

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