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Why is she married?

You said she didn't know it was him till watching video and then you said she saw him at the end of the session. Which is it ?

In response to the previous commentors...

Firstly, she is married purely because Sophia is based on a real person. However, I agree the detail was maybe not required for the purposes of the reader - it was there as the story was initially written for the pleasure of the author.

Secondly, I can only apologise if I have made a continuity error. I am a new writer and I am open to such feedback. The comment about not knowing until a few days later was meant to refer to not knowing it was James tongue, not Mia's providing the source of pleasure, but I must not have expressed this as intended.