All Comments on 'When we danced to Revel's Bolero'

Whatever else Mr Revel might have done he certainly didn't compose Ravel's Bolero:-)

What an incredibly inane pile of flowery dribble.

And most of the (mostly run-on) sentences don't make any sense, except to who speak in strings of adjectives.

That is not writing...

your comment gave me a good laugh.. well done :)

I actually didn't even glance past the first line until after seeing your comment. Mis-naming Ravel in the title didn't bode well, so I took a glance at the start to see if perhaps the the authoer had a character who reveled in his bolero, but alas, twas not to be.