All Comments on 'When Will She Learn?'

Pathetic wim he means.

No just say whore. Read more stories, get an editor before you send in another story.

a name. Why not just stop reading these stories they get your little pee pee all red and mad.

You're telling her she needs an editor when I saw virtually no errors in the entire story, and yet you can't make it through a comment title without f'in up?

I loved it, and so did my husband. Keep writing.

i think this was a good submission...and y the hell is everyone so fuckin worried about grammar and spelling neways? stop criticizing like ur a damn english proffessor..........Lys