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All Comments on 'Where did My Damn Key Go Pt. 02'

by PascalSage

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sissyjenny1sissyjenny1over 4 years ago
Promising but editing needed

Editing needs to improve. Lots of mistakes on words. Grown instead of groin. Mistakes on he and she. Little things that add up. Otherwise fun story

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsover 4 years ago
Awesome!!

Dying to know how she got his key! 5 all the way!

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Have a chastity device?

Go to a hardware store. Buy a bolt cutter (huge plier tool). Find a worthy friend and get the damn thing off.

FailedscoutFailedscoutover 4 years ago
Please Proof Read

This could have been a decent story but all the spelling, grammar and jumbled thoughts and sentences make it a very difficult read. I just had to give up. I won't even attempt part 03. Sorry

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
yes

Really enjoyed the story I do hope for a part 3

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I'm an amateur Smut and Fantasy writer that enjoys writing bdsm fiction. I also do commissions. feel free to message me if you would like a personal story written for your pleasure.