by LJA644
Nice story. I saw in a movie once, 2 guys and a gal talking. The gal and one guy talking about their early sexual experiences. He up and said: “it’d be so much easier if you just told us what to do: a little to the left, a little to the right… there - just like that!”
Okay gave this 5 stars. Really this belongs in the Loving Wives catagory. Well done.
Yes, as others have said, good communication is the key. Many thanks for a wonderful, simple, realistic, story. Cheers
5 stars, but I'm confused as to why there's a "cheating" tag on the story if there's no actual cheating in the end? I almost didn't bother reading (which would be my loss).
So well written. Great story line bordering idealistic couple goals. The writer seems to be expert on psychology, sexology and relationships in addition to imagination !! Kudos. Must also be posted in LW category as beautiful lotus in the punks of cheating and burning or reconciliation mud.
I guess the cheating tag is because the theme of the story is her suspicions about how he had acquired his new skills.
I really enjoyed this story and worried along with her up to the reveal and all was explained.
The story was spoilt a bit by missing and incorrect words. Better editing is needed.
This piece was well written. However, there was too much focus on the sex and not enough on the story. Since most stories here are about sex there is little to gain by heavy descriptions. Thanks for sharing your effort.
You are a gifted writer. What I love in your heroine is the delicious mix of her unrestrained sexual appetite and her SO proper conventional morality. She did not even think, when she thought he was cheating, to get a 'teacher' like him. Or did she? The ambiguity is delightfully naughty. Congratulations!
Loved it! Good characters and I liked the way the wife “investigated” and didn’t go off the deep end and start some revenge trip before she had the facts and could speak to her husband. Great story will be in my favourites for re-reading. Thanks for the good work
Ah the world of today. You do nice things for your SO, they think you're cheating on them. Instead of talking to you about it, they go behind your back and get up to all sorts of questionable shenanigans. So much for trust, eh?
She sees something that could easily be misinterpreted and doesn't massively overreact and have excessively cruel revenge sex? Am I in the right category? Thought this was Loving Wives. ;)
I'm amused that one comment says there was too much emphasis on the sex, while I felt it could have used a good bit more. I did however, really appreciate the plausibility of it all. I find it difficult on occasion when the plot requires too much suspension of belief.
I don’t think there was necessarily too much emphasis on the sex. It’s that the sex wasn’t presented in a very erotic way. It became boring and repetitive