All Comments on 'Where Do I Belong? Ch. 02'

I really like this story cant wait till the next chapter

Your concept is OK, but you're trying to express too much in one paragraph, which leads to a feeling of run-on sentences. There's hardly any character development at all.

Why do people start stories and leave them unfinished,,,so many on here,i have to start at the end to make sure there is an ending before even starting to read anymore stories i guess.

ok that only wets the appetite but really you started it then left it for how many years now you really must come back and finish it what happens..next

I need more of this! It's really good!

This has the potential to become a good story. Keep writing and please make the chapters longer, for me personally I hate cliff hangers but I REALLY like this story. Can’t wait to see what you do next.