All Comments on 'Where She Belongs'

Brilliant !

Lockdown seemed to serve you well . What a shame we were forced to spend that time alone, it would have been great to have a Jill to play with. Enjoyed your story , good fun , well written but also quite poignant that we had to spend that time alone. I hope you are planning a second chapter at least.

Hope you will add more to this or write more.

I guess we all do, otherwise we wouldn't be reading this

that is, unless you wanted someone like him, and that's fine too

because, after all, it does take two to tango ;)

I love the build up. How you learn about the characters, how he works with his ex first and moves to his sister. The subtle cat and mouse game leading up to the big show. The story definitely checked all the boxes. I hope to see more from you whether a continuation of this story or the beginning of a new one. Thank you for a wonderful read.

Great start to the story. There's still two other holes he has yet to use. Hopefully, there's another few chapters left in this story line.

This was so much more than just brother fucks sisters. Nicely done!

You did warn us, but didn't suspect it would be this bad.

This belongs in the bdsm section, not here.

Marvin

It was ok until meat toilet.

She's the perfect slave, so devoted!

Such a great story love where this could go as more chapters form. She's the perfect sub for her brother! Love the dynamic, hope the next chapter arrives soon!

Great story it's really got me pulled in. Love their dynamic, she's the perfect Sub for him! Hope more chapters are coming soon!

PLS CHAPTER 6 RN

Hi. If this is your first submission (no pun intended), I have to say that this is a lot better than from some authors who have been with Literotica for years. You have crafted an excellent BDSM story, blended with incest which just begs for further exploration. Your story is developed nicely across several ideas, building smoothly to Jill’s submission to her brother. Your command of the language is also very effective; I’m just sorry there is no more material from you to read. Never mind, I’ll keep an eye out for future developments. Thank you for a great read.

Looking forward to what you put out next.

Very well written story. Lots of room for future growth with just getting into the submission of sister as well as having the ex girlfriend element still available. Looking forward to reading the next instalment, can’t wait.

I already wrote you a pm, but I'd figure I'd write one here too. 10/10 content. Please produce more BDSM(choking!)+Sibcest content. Please. (this story would be nice. I'm almost craving character development/backstory from future updates, which is way too much to ask of an erotica; however your writing is really good and I think the challenge might be good for your skills). Can't wait to read more of your work! Thanks!

That was fucking amazing.

Bro, where's the part two? Such a great story need n update fast!

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Part two please. Sibcest and BDSM are so god