All Comments on 'While I was Sleeping'

I do hope you write more stories.

Please write more stories, loving your writing

Thank you. I find this genre challenging, I have a few near completion on the desktop I will post soon if I can’t poke holes in the story.

Kate

XOXO

Good story well written, my only comment would be it ended a bit too quickly. I don't like super long stories as much as short ones but this was just a little too short for me. More please.

There were a few phrases that left me very confused. How does one put their hips to their breasts? He stood between the couch and the head of the bed in a hotel room to remove her panties? I think there was one point where he was drinking a glass of water, which filled the gag with water?