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MimiRayMimiRayabout 4 years ago

A well-constructed world, and delightful writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hate your writing style and I'd suggest that you keep your day job and rethink your decision on going back to school. Study the art of storytelling & crafting a novel. Ma'am, with the utmost respect. Sorry if this is too much girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great start and, contrary to the previous commenter, love your writing style, probably because I’m not an ignorant slack-jawed educationally subnormal halfwit. Please keep going.

yibalayibalaover 2 years agoAuthor

:-)) Thank you, and I hope you enjoy(ed) the rest!

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Longtime Literotica reader. Mostly a writer of Afro-fantasy, though I may try my hand at contemporary or historical tales as well. Happy to be here to develop my craft, and get feedback from other writers and readers! Currently, you'll find the original versions of the enti...

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