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by RolloJTomasi

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 months ago

Captured my attention, which was your intention. Let’s see where you take us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Nicely written! I look forward to reading your next chapters.

FillDirtWantedFillDirtWantedabout 2 months ago

Good story, great start with real possibilities. My only issue, I spent to much time on the paragraph about the "Ultra Pluses". Stopped and did a search online, nothing. After a couple reads of the paragraph, Handcuffs.

Djmac1031Djmac1031about 2 months ago

A good start. Definitely interested in seeing where this goes

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A person who thought they could get away with it. I read that some people communicate with followers by updating their bio. So I’m going to try. Chapter 6 of While There Is Hope comes out tomorrow. I hope (that’s funny) that you are enjoying the story. I just wanted to say th...

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