All Comments on 'Whiplash'

Ceased up, red fuss. Fucking fuck, you put your name to this?

Hope he get the pox like the writer of such rubbish

I haven't read your two other stories.

But that was a quirky tale. And good for it. I enjoyed it and I am not easily pleased. Don't be too concerned about the grammar nazi. Just proofread before you post Four stars.

That mysterious woman....

I hope for a series about her and the guy in the story.

The only douchebags around are the three idiots who posted before me.

My kinda girl!! Go Alice!!