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D4L4netD4L4netover 5 years agoAuthor

Please leave a vote and / or a comment to let me know what you think!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice

I want to run out and get my own can of whipped cream now! Very good story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good just too long

Great story just would've liked to be a bit shorter

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