by Lemonletters
Great writing and a hot story! I love the detail in your story and the detail of how his bites marks marked her as his, but also showed their lust for each other. Great job!
Nice story.
Paragraphing needs work
'discrete'? Perhaps you meant 'discreet' They're not the same.
I liked it. A well-constructed word picture. A hint of naughtiness in the exhibitionism, but clearly a committed couple spicing up their lovelife/sexlife.
Nicely done, Ms LL,
Lue
Very well done. I look forward to reading your other stories here.
Holy fuck... I need a drink, too.
That was quite the sexy vignette. I have been a fan of your work for a while but this is an especially favourite one of mine.
Episodes like that make the sex that much better!!! We love hooking up in areas where we can be 'caught' in the act!