All Comments on 'Whisky and Wanting'

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SciFurzSciFurzover 4 years ago

I think I need a drink. ;-)

JackGray6789JackGray6789over 4 years ago
Great story

Great writing and a hot story! I love the detail in your story and the detail of how his bites marks marked her as his, but also showed their lust for each other. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

It's nice, for a change, to read a well constructed and written story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Quite Good

Nice story.

Paragraphing needs work

'discrete'? Perhaps you meant 'discreet' They're not the same.

luedonluedonover 4 years ago
Clever, and sweet

I liked it. A well-constructed word picture. A hint of naughtiness in the exhibitionism, but clearly a committed couple spicing up their lovelife/sexlife.

Nicely done, Ms LL,

Lue

GentfidelityGentfidelityover 4 years ago
Great work!

Exciting story my pleasure to follow here too!

CarnalLustsCarnalLustsabout 4 years ago
Well Done

Very well done. I look forward to reading your other stories here.

masked_authormasked_authoralmost 4 years ago

Holy fuck... I need a drink, too.

That was quite the sexy vignette. I have been a fan of your work for a while but this is an especially favourite one of mine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Episodes like that make the sex that much better!!! We love hooking up in areas where we can be 'caught' in the act!

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