by PickFiction
Well written. Sensual and provocative. The description of Wilma’s exhibitionistic desire was captivating. And the build up to the climax was like foreplay. I’d like to read more from this writer, and if she’s a woman, I’d like to go to W-13 with her.
Well written with an excellent tempo. Although perhaps a little fairytale the way everything clicks, who’s complaining? There’s a host of follow on possibilities here with romance, a developing relationship and a myriad of exhibitionist and group activities in their future.i can’t wait 😊
I really love your writing.
Sensitive and yet teasingly erotic.
Fabulous !!!