All Comments on 'Whistler's Island'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Terrific Story

Well written. Sensual and provocative. The description of Wilma’s exhibitionistic desire was captivating. And the build up to the climax was like foreplay. I’d like to read more from this writer, and if she’s a woman, I’d like to go to W-13 with her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great start- let’s have some more please

Well written with an excellent tempo. Although perhaps a little fairytale the way everything clicks, who’s complaining? There’s a host of follow on possibilities here with romance, a developing relationship and a myriad of exhibitionist and group activities in their future.i can’t wait 😊

HardBenHardBenabout 4 years ago
ANOTHER GREAT STORY

I really love your writing.

Sensitive and yet teasingly erotic.

Fabulous !!!

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