All Comments on 'White Horses Ch. 01'

i believe this one could be a nice, long hot series...just the way i like them and although no sex in this one that most want...i like to see them set out with a story/plot and watch it grow...this one has all of the potiental of a "no way am i putting this down" novel...keep up the great work and please hurry with the next chapter...love this!!! respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Enougfh beatings and rapes will cause her to get off and start liking it. If you don't think so, ask at any Woman's shelter in the country, ask the runaway girls and boys; ask the relatives of the Teen and sub-teen suicides.

Ask hte author of this piece or any of the people who favorably comment on it.

Your moniker suits you well. This is the first I've read of your work, and will most definitely not be the last. The descriptions are near photographic in their clarity, and I found the dialogue brilliant. I know I'm biased, but DAMN! I do, however, find the piece teasing in its brevity. Maybe it's my own greed that makes me bitter, but if the next chapter is as short as this one, I do hope you will continue with the series. Soon. I have issues with instant gratification... lol.