All Comments on 'White on a Black Canvas'

That was really good. Thanks

Utterly Fantastic

Yeah. Far better than the normal garbage in the IR category. Thank you!

Interesting storyline. I enjoyed it. 5*

Great imagery in this one, and a sweet beginning to a relationship. I thought he might paint on her body as well... Perhaps her pregnant belly in the future!

Painting = panting = love !

A nice two person romance story simple easy to follow and entertaining. Loved it!

Cheers

SAGE

Beautiful and sexy! I loved it. Well written love story.

Too short :(

Definitely 5 Stars. Great story, you have a good imagination and know how to get it on paper.

I wish I had a roommate that painted in the nude!

5

Three Dog Night, "Just an old-fashioned love song"!!!

THANK YOU!!!!!

Great story lousy ending could have been so much more in my opinion

Great story for an old guy! I can say that because IR1, 2…

Good story overall, but didn't really get me emotionally involved for some reason. 4*

Fun. Nicely crafted but needs editing for spelling and typos. Horde not hoard, collage and waiver not waver, also football player not play. Watch out for depending on spellcheck- you end up with properly spelled but wrong words.

Loved it... fingers crossed for part 2.

It isn't a Pulitzer prize novel (although I've read some that were terrible). It is however an enjoyable erotic short story. I loved it. Thanks.

Nice. I identified with the story as I have dated a few lovely mahogany skinned women, among others. and eventually married one 34 years ago. Still together.

'Hordes' [of people], not 'hoards'. A hoard is something of value put aside, saved for later use.

And from one of your other stories, it's 'arctic', not 'artic'.

‘Big’ as used would be an adjective, not an adverb.

Kind of proud of you, actually, for putting this in romance and not interracial.