All Comments on 'White Slaves of Benghazi'

YOU CALL THIS AN EROTIC STORY!

THIS IS CRAP

Again, yoy have the ideas of making an erotica but you severely lack the skill to put it together properly. Characters and plot lines are thrown in without context. You're literally writing this as if we all know what's going on inside your head. We don't. Set up your story and slowly develop on it. Or get an editor. I can help if you'd be open to that.

I won't comment on this "STORY". It's so far fetch, it's simply unbelievable.

You have some decent core ideas (tricking someone into getting enslaved, punishment from old servants, etc) but terrible supporting ideas trying to set up your core ideas (somehow nobody knows about Banghazi's practices, the slavery wasn't immediately annulled when they got back to New York, etc) and your execution was absolutely awful and not erotic at all in any way whatsoever.