All Comments on 'Whiteboi goes to Harlem Pt. 11'

Well, this covered a lot of territory that needed to be covered, but Mitch still fucked up in this conversation with Leroy. He should have started out by telling Leroy he was sorry, that everything that had happened was his fault and then explained what was said. As for Trina, I don't think she's done with trying to screw Mitch yet, and not in the good way. I really don't think that she's a psychopathic lunatic, but I definitely think she's quite heartless and vindictive. Now, while I don't know where you're planning to take Mitch's relationship with Leroy and Tyrone, I really like that you've introduced this new character, Bronte, into this story. At this point, he seems like he would be a much better fit for Mitch. Looking forward to finding out what happens in part 12.

Kinda losing my attention

Thanks for being honest. I work very hard on these stories, as do many other authors, so I'd be interested to know why you feel that way. Message me if you'd like.