All Comments on 'Whiteout Ch. 02'

A real nice story, but please stop using an repeating the word chaos, we or at lest I under stand she is a demon of chaos an,she gets off on it. Other than that,what she does and gets from him is eye opening to say the lest. Please write an other chapter soon, will be looking out for it.

good story

enjoying the story. I just am wondering why the demon at the front desk and she have said that he might be able to teach her how to control her powers. Why would a newly sired demon know more than one 100's of years older? I am hoping you can tell us more about how this chaos thing works for her.

Somehow I missed this chapter. Good job,so good in fact, I'm going to chapter 3 right now and ending my comment w/that