All Comments on 'Whitewash High Ch. 17'

Glad to see you put your Game Controler to the side long enough to write.

Or maybe a longer one. I am hooked but might miss a chapter when they are spread out.

so he was in the yakuza as well huh?

Yeah thats like a african american presiding a neonazi chapter. Ok beyond that, the good its oficially Nik's confident, sad about her condition. So things are gonna get dangerous for everyone.

Now that i think about, what will be the plan of Valerie with regards of Amanda, she already push her to the "right" path. What its the next step? That part about Gake and Michelle... the next thing that they will compete will be who can get pregnant more times LOL,

Another good chapter, i came for the sex, i stay for the plot LOL.

Don't stop now , we want more and we want it now!!!

I just read all 17 chapters. It started S great stroke material but now I am really invested to read the history and see where the story goes with all of Nik’s Women

@FabGMx: More likely Gale and Valerie competing to see who gets more pregnant first.

@MaxGirth69: Thanks for reading the entire series in one go. You must be exhausted.

As of this comment (November 17th, 2017), a lot more of Nik's history is going to be explained in upcoming chapters of Rising Sun. Chapter 2 has been submitted and waiting for approval. There are a lot of subtle and not so subtle plot threads people can find throughout WWH that alludes to events in Rising Sun. Feel free to write your guesses here, or message them to me.

Keep the comments and feedback coming. They always motivate me.

Can't wait for chapter 18