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Anabelle_McAllisterAnabelle_McAllisterover 4 years ago
Pretty hot story

Overall, well written and I enjoyed the concept. A little exposition heavy at the beginning, and I would have liked to see a little action between Jane and Cass, but maybe that can happen in future stories?

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