All Comments on 'Who Killed Jenny Schecter? Ch. 01'

This is brilliant. You've got Alice's voice nailed. Shane's too, but I think Alice is the harder of the two to get right. Loved the Spartacus moment. I don't know if you've done it or not, but I'd post this on AO3 or ff.net to probably get more of a response. This is not the site I go to for TLW fanfic. I just happened to see it on the main page and thought I'd check it out.

Thanks for the tip, Anon. I'm on it. Say turned.

Have you read my other Shane and Carmen novel on this site? It starts at https://www.literotica.com/s/shane-and-carmen-the-novelization-ch-01

I only started reading because another Chapter came up in search results, & I'm trying to learn "Carmen __&"?