by mattpantyhose
I loved both the concept as well as your writing of the story. Great job, I hope that you'll consider continuing the storyline. Thanks.
It's great that Tiffany got what she wanted, bigger boobs and nice ass. All the rest would be very nice too. Nothing like being a slut and enjoying gang bangs.
Better pacing. I love it was all happy and desired changes. That's a fun twist. Great job!
-Joe Nobody
Totally lost me (and I tried again but stopped) when she was first "lead" into the chamber.
An idiot wrote these!!!